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My First Journal!

Sat Oct 17, 2009, 7:46 PM
So for my first journal entry I thought I would put a couple of extremly short stories that popped into my head during English class. The first one is titled Darkness.

My eyes open to a veil of darkness that covers every inch of my world. I began to grope my way around in a desperate attempt to find light. The longer this darkness continues to veil my world, the I begin to hear voices whispering. I hear terrible, unholy things whispered; things no human should hear. “GO AWAY!” I scream as I put my hands to my ears. Tears spill from my eyes as the unholy whisperings continues. “G-go...Pleas..”

Okay, okay this may sound really dark and stuff, but my class was listen to Disturbed and... well... it just popped into my head. Now the next one is a little happier. Its titled Take A Chance. Enjoy! <3

“Come with me.” Whispered Tallan. His hand was extended toward me, its calloused fingers beckoning me to accept his offer.

Just do it.
Why?
Take a chance.
What if I get hurt?
You’ll never know till you try it.

The argument in my head continued for a few more moments. I looked into his dark blue eyes that seemed to smile, and I felt my hand slowly extend toward his already outstretched hand. He pulled me toward him, and the warmth of his skin made me melt into his arms. “I knew you couldn’t resist.” He whispered. I could feel the smirk in his voice without even having to look up.
“Shut up.”

This little thing popped into my head while listening to Parrallel Hearts by FictionJunction. I love this song and it helped get past some of my bad writers block.

*If you like either of the little stories please comment, and I love creative critism. Thank you! And, yes I have my reasons for wanting to put these into a journal entry instead of just submitting it.

  • Mood: Annoyed
  • Listening to: Birthday Massacre
  • Reading: Pandora Hearts
  • Watching: Saw (I don't which one...)
  • Playing: Sims 3
  • Eating: Spicy Peppers <3
  • Drinking: Water

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  • Current Residence: In your cookie jar :3
  • Interests: writing
  • Favourite movie: Airplane!
  • Favourite band or musician: Linkin Park, Seether, Breaking Benjamin, shall I continue...
  • Favourite genre of music: rock, metal
  • Favourite poet or writer: J.K. Rowling
  • Favourite photographer: not sure...
  • Favourite style of art: anime/manga
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  • MP3 player of choice: iPod
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  • Favourite game: Sims 3 and Harvest Moon
  • Favourite gaming platform: PC
  • Favourite cartoon character: Gilbert and Break(Pandora Hearts)
  • Personal Quote: "When push comes to shove, shove back."
  • Tools of the Trade: pencils...

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:iconneppa:
Thank you so much for the watch!

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"Without art, comic books would be but brief novels!"
:iconxxforbiddenxxlovexx:
Your welcome. I love your drawing style. <3
:iconawai-kyuuketsuki:
OMFG THAT WAS THE MOST SHIT ENDING EVER DDDDD: WHY, WHY PANDORA HEARTS?? WHYYYYYY

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:iconxxforbiddenxxlovexx:
I don't know why! I'm terrified to read Pandora Hearts now!

I think I might faint... My dad just called me to tell me that my step-mom is pregnant! -shocked stare- I feel like I might throw-up... This is the most shocking news I've had in months...
:iconawai-kyuuketsuki:
:O Holy sheet. EPISODE 25 WAS FUCKED

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:iconxxforbiddenxxlovexx:
Seriously! It solved nothing!!! They better solve more in the manga! I just wasted 30 minutes of my time on that! GRRR!!!
:iconawai-kyuuketsuki:
I NO RITE

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